Monday, 8 August 2016

The Little Squid-Narrative writing

This is my Narrative Writing that I have done on The Little Mermaid
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3 comments:

  1. Riley Papakura Central School15 August 2016 at 09:43

    Hi Riley My Name is Riley I really like the way you retold this story with lots of description well done.

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  2. Anonymous17 August 2016 at 11:34

    Thanks Riley. I really liked your feedback.

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  3. Anonymous16 June 2017 at 09:52

    Hi Riley My name is kelly i'm a student from park estate school I like your Narrative because it has some dialog.next time you could add some dialog in your narrative.

    kind regards
    kelly

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