Monday 13 June 2016

My if poem. Hope you like it.

4 comments:

  1. Like your work keep it up.

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  2. Hi I'm Sarah I really like your poem it's cool but in slide 9 it kinda doesn't make sense but you did well. Keep up the good work.

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  3. Thank you Sarah. Slide nine is meant to make you just drive around instead of booking flights and not having to wait for a certain amount of time but thank you anyway for your feedback.

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  4. hi Riley my name is Ashana I wish that page 5 and 6 were real because page 5 would be so Awesome because I don't realy like vegetables and page 6 would be even better because there will be no money and every think would be free (if you want to go to my blog it is http://wpsashanad.blogspot.nz.)

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